I like it. I'ts very creative. One of the best stories I ever read!

Marvelous story! Makes me wonder what my cat does at night...

How cute! I know this is a childrens story and all, so it's very unrealistic. I really like the part where you said that there were stripes on Hermias fur when the light on it the right way. Very cool!

Your story is good. Kepp writing you might have a future in children's books.

Cute! Very, very cute.

*smiles* SO AMUSING! It's a great story, I think I might read it to my little brother for bedtime. Awesome.

Cool, I really thought it was great. A super hero cat is a great idea. Keep up the good work.

Okay, that was outrageous! Hilarious and it just cracked me up. I keep on seeing a cat taht does all that and I remembered Puss in Shrek 2. God, that was really funny. Good work and it's nice to see you've posted something up for a long time.