wow powerful...

I like how you ended it with replaying the images of the family members relations he cut ties from...in a sense.

Incredible! This is so moving and perfect! i LOVE it!

This is exactly how I would write a poem to my father. Not only that, but it flows nicely. Good job :)

hmm interestingly true.. I liek the ending a lot how you combine his family now and his family before

Good poem. Good rhythm + rhyme...one of the very few poems on fictionpress that has both. Most have awful rhythm and no rhyme, making it horrible to read. If you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R! =)