Reviews for You Didn't Bother

Flavor of Rain 2005-02-21 ch 1,	abusewow powerful... I like how you ended it with replaying the images of the family members relations he cut ties from...in a sense.
Dancinggal5389 2005-01-01 ch 1,	abuseIncredible! This is so moving and perfect! i LOVE it!
Written Shadows 2004-09-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is exactly how I would write a poem to my father. Not only that, but it flows nicely. Good job :)
simpleplan13 2004-09-12 ch 1,	abusehmm interestingly true.. I liek the ending a lot how you combine his family now and his family before
pandagirl11 2004-09-11 ch 1,	abuseGood poem. Good rhythm + rhyme...one of the very few poems on fictionpress that has both. Most have awful rhythm and no rhyme, making it horrible to read. If you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R! =)