The bridge was awsome and the chorus was even better. Your choice of words were disturbing and made it even better.

Your songs are great! I love em! Wish I could write songs like this *laughs at the idea* Amazing!
-Tipped-

That was a good song...I think everyone can relate to it somehow...good.

It's a very nice song. I wish I could make songs that can actually make sense.

Wow! I just had a moment like this a few days ago. I can really relate to it and I don't think that you are getting rust at all. You shoulod keep up writing songs you have a real gift for it.
ALso I have new poems up, any advice you could give me would be appreciated.

This is great. I really liked this, good song, strong meaning and feel to it. I like the verse that begins, Plastered smiles...and ends womb of blemished pink lips, that was an amazing line...I know what that means and it doesn't sound wrong, you know? It sounds like I dunno how to explain it, but it really fits. You've got a lot of talent Kase, tremendous amounts of talent...I applaud you!

Wow great song! So what if it's your first song in a while, hell it was worth it! I want more! Lol

Catchy lyrics. You're good at rhyming things. I like it.
"My trust in you has died today
And you've left my body here to decay"
I love those lines.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

I like it.. awsome rhyming and powerful phrases

Wow. . .thats excellent. . .I can't even imagine how someone could flame this! I'm glad you finally wrote a song, because I love your writing but I can't really read long stories on the computer. . .
~Moonbeam Dreamfinder (my kender name, that makes me HAPPY!)

Wow..this is great hun!! I loves it! great workers!

gurl thats a great song. youve got some wicked talent and wow! amazing and great great great! keep on writing gurl!