Once again that was incredibly amazing. I've read lots of poems about Sep. 11 but they were all just really cheesy. But this one was real. You made the victims real. It's true that they were just ordinary people. And it could have been anyone.

i think it worth reading. It showed a lot of emmotion, which is pretty good!

This poem really touched me. It made me cry, all the times I have wondered what it would be like without my parents or greatest friends...I loved it and I look forward to reading more of your work. -Noe

I love your was very touching and filled with simple emotion,which conveyed an authentic should never forget what happened this day,I'm glad you didn't.