Hey amethyst... this is a great poem. I can totally identify with this. Great work.

This was an interesting little piece, it seemed to me that there was a kind of careless style in certain lines, like the first few. Nice twist on the end.

Very Nice twist at the end and yet so often true for so many people. It is an empowering message of hope, and conveyed very well.
WELL DONE
KEEP WRITING!
F.C