"But I didn’t care, he was, after all, my own secret, lost, and wounded dream." Whoa. That last line just killed me.

Seriously, awesomw work. I feel so special for inspiring something as great as this. Love.

very nice. i liked the phrase 'secret desires or lost wishes'.

i love this. your writing is so beautiful and lyrical, and i love your analogies and descriptions. this is amazing.

Whoa whoa! Freaking awesome! I like the second chapter better. The band-aid comparison is really great... I had never thought about it. I just feel like writing right now...

See yaPampire

whoa! you gotta keep this going, roll roll.

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this is good too(: very meaningful and angsty. i like it.

this touched me a lot. very nice, very angsty and emotional. this is the first time i've seen the 'sense of completion' written in such a way and i must admit i like it.

so sad, it made me think about... band aids jaja and I don't know, I am glad I've never suffered what she does, I'm glad we're always curable.

*aw* this was cute, very poetic congratulations ,it´s great :D I am very in the mood for things like this right now you know? keep writing