 Humor Me Pink 2008-07-29 . chapter 1I think it's beautiful that such a short poem has so much depth.
Your faith is ever present. |
 Needa S 2006-03-20 . chapter 1Very nice, awesome write. |
 Dr. Colleen 2006-03-04 . chapter 1This really is like a song. Have you thought of setting it to music?Dr.Colleen |
 SandwichPress 2005-11-11 . chapter 1I like your poetry a lot.
Evidently you didn't get very far in my play. In fact, you clearly didn't get past the first scene. So when you said you liked my characters, especially Felix, you meant that you liked Felix more than Aneas. If you haven't read it, just don't comment on it. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-25 . chapter 1Rich and wonderful esp. the "thougsand skies."
For the quote, how much do you wish to quote? |
 Windsong 2005-05-08 . chapter 1Very pretty little piece. I love quick little poems like this. I don't entirely understand the last line (are you asking Him to allow us to understand His Will?), but aside from that, I like it and...don't really have anything more to say than that. ;^^ Keep writing! -Windsong |
 THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-05-07 . chapter 1Nice. |
 Aslan Israel 2005-05-06 . chapter 1Beautiful, and so true. Wonderful. |
 Summerdazed 2004-09-17 . chapter 1hello! first of all, let me tell you that this is so so beautiful!! You're good!! Secondly, thank you for your flattering reviews *blush*. By the way i think it's so cool that I've met a hebrew (you)! My best freind who passed away loved hebrew, the language, the culture, everything. I've written something for her if you'd like to see. :O) it's on FP too.
Anyway, thanks again, and really - this is good.
=summerdazed= |
 mistressKC 2004-09-14 . chapter 1good song... very nice ^-^ |
 Ikuisuuden Teiden Kulkija 2004-09-11 . chapter 1Wow...this is just so...wonderful :D |