I read your story outloud to one of my classes and they seemed to like it. It amused them, so thanks for helping me to kill some time with them today.

Sincerely,Room 205

My kids need to hear about this!

Well writen.

I put you on my favorite story list.

Great little story :)

That was definitely cute and funny. Oh, and was there a moral to this story?hm... (throws candy wrapper on bedroom floor) Oh, well. I'll figure it out next time : )

Ok...that was wierd. Not the kind of story I would usually read. I did not like where you mentioned the 'missing link.' You see, I am a Christian and don't believe in evolution. Anyway, I would say it is more Sci-fi than humor/action/adventure. I would have classified it sci-fi/action/adventure. But otherwise, it was pretty good.

Very Good GambitsJami. That was quite fun. I particularly liked the line - Her dark red hair puffed about her head in riotous curls. That's just wonderful I could easily imagine that.

Great story! Very creative. I loved it, and it has quite inspired me.

It's a terriffic short story, but you could have definjatly given it a bit more detail.

What a cute story! Very 'little-kid' oriented yet still intelligent. Great job.