This looks very promising. At this stage it has a lot of names which can make it a bit destracting, but the point of the story remains fairly clear.

It is easy to visually picture this happening.

P.S. I now have chapters. (It's exciting).

Just to let you know: When I see these characters, I think of the following actors: Phillip Eichler=Sam Waterston; Jacob Rosenfeld=Jeff Goldblum; Sammy Pascal=Hector Elizondo (If my story were a movie, I would ask them to play the parts!) ^..^

wow... awesome story... death camps are just SO WRONG... and thanks for putting me in your fave section...