maybe...*shrug*...sometimes we wish to be over things and people, but it just doesnt work out..sad...good luck great job, keep writing

'Was I like Britney?

Stronger Than Yesterday

Or was I like Justin?

Too tired to cry him a river.'

That was real funny, how you combined her feelings that he did not love her with funny thoughts. Keep writing! Do check out my work if you'd the time.

Wow this is so nice. You describe the emotions in this poem so eloquently - I'm impressed. Keep on writing!
sinner saint
P.S. Thanks for your comment on "Faith". It's much appreciated.

Really cool. I love the way u incorperate certain songs.
*shy

you never dedicate the poem 'maybe' to me..!
so sad lor..
i m also ur frenz and somemore classmates lor...
anyway..
though ur poem doesn'trhyme, but i feel that it ispretty good and well writen overall..
Jia you k!

u nuts ah ma? wat was the last part abt me? which part am i? u crazy. u haf a crush on me or that other special someone? i think u're really bonkers. LOL! juz kidding. nice one though. yep.

I don't know how to explain it, but I like this poem. It's different, in a good way of course. Never stop writing.