   Heavenmetal 2007-05-11 . chapter 1Great Poem! I love the wistful almost dreamlike feel to it. |
 de Leon 2006-01-20 . chapter 1Wow...wowI am currently in a state of awe. You make me believe in writing again with this poem. You have perfect rythym, beautiful imagery, and thus have inspired me to take the art of writing more seriously. I have now seen what can be done with it and I can never be the same again. Thank you.~Elaine |
 When Life Gives you Lemons.... 2005-10-29 . chapter 1 He is no childe -_-''. Great poem, I really liked it. |
| elianthos 2005-10-05 . chapter 1 Mh... dream-like and very vivid at the same time. It goes quite in detail, but elegantly. I like it! (ah ah, difficult guess) |
 NybCR 2004-12-05 . chapter 1"childe" my foot... ;)
That was a lovely poem. Perfect rhythm and rhyming, and the picture you paint is quite... vivid. Detailed descriptions. Very nice. I tip my hat to you. (or, I would if I had one) |
| Annie 2004-10-03 . chapter 1 Wow. Great job with the rythm. It was confusing, but nice to read. |
 poetic abortion 2004-09-19 . chapter 1BEUTIFUL ! I'm totally spechless. |
 Yellow Log 2004-09-18 . chapter 1this was a sweet poem to read...this words and everything
keep up the good work |
 Kytten 2004-09-12 . chapter 1Very nice. I like it. I think you did very well on the sex. reminded me vaguely of a mix of Peter Pan and Morrowind (a computer game about elves. Vaguely like Lord of the Rings, only mentioned it on the off chance that you have played it) |
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