this is very cool the whole way through- my only criticism (and please take this in the best possible way) is that you are too blunt and clean-cut at the end... the reader should get it in the abstracts without you being so direct at the end... although you could probably just pare down the ending and it would work nicely. Something about your poetry reminds me of my own, so I am compelled to edit it :) This is amazing, though.

This is just so magnificent! (sniffles and blows on her kleenex napkin) It's so...(blows more)
It's so moving...it moved me from my seat to the floor coz my heart made me double over with such amazement at this peice of writing!
I love it! (sobs more) It's so grand...smooth...just so very nice...and it got stuck in my heart (weeps for something else)
I'm going to kill you for making me cry! (scampers away crying) (j/k)
The most notorious stalker of F.P.
The most perverted untouched virgin,
- Wicked Tongue

OMFG! This poem is so awesome! i love it! It's wicked awesome! You rock! Kick **!

So confusing at the end, but in a good way. It made me read the last part again, and when I got it it seemed to make perfect sense to me... because that's what happens to em sometimes. *meep* It's so heartwrenching and confusing for someone to be in that position.
This is a great poem *slaps on fave list*

It seems more about a friend than a lover... either way its cool.. although I am the girl dressed in all black and I know that people are afriad of me so i have a different perspective... thanks for your reviews.. ill try and check out your story, but I suck with sstories.. im more of a poetry girl!