every word of this is amazing. My one suggestion: bring in the theme a bit earlier-it seems like you thought of it halfway through the poem and added it in. However, don't take that as a real criticism; I liked what you did with the beginning of the poem as well. All in all, great imagery and extremely well written.

I know exactly how you feel. People say that all the time right? Too weird, but I really feel like I do. I know what it's like to search, and them be fruitless, I know how it feels. You may not be a Christian, but I want you to know that God has made one special person for you, and just because you haven't found him yet, doesn't mean you wont. I pray these simple words give you hope. -Cara

Aww, the whole thing with one wing almost made me cry. Like wanting to fly, to be embraced by the winds, but knowing that you never can... Aw!
It flitted about from happy to sad quite a bit here, and you put it across very well. Like these lines (They told me it was okay to cry,
But then they scorned me when I did,
) they were my favourite, and this stanza (Together, here, we would stand,
In the cradle of wind, and embrace of rain,
Side by side, hands clasped,
Laughter echoed by the falling sky.
)
They truly put across emotion. Excellent poem.
I will get around to reading your fics after supper. Thanks for reviewing my stuff... and I love Evanescance! I feel so honoured to have my poems compared to them!

wow... awesome descriptions and beautifull written... I liek the format too.. awesome awesome poem... I can defiantely relate

It's so touching, I was deeply moved. Keep writing! and keep me updated.

very nice. you're very good at poetry. when you have enough, you should try publishing a collection of poems.

Great poem. Very moving.