|Reviews for Burst of Colour|
| relapse into change 4/23/12 . chapter 4
i like this, it's lovely
my favorite were the first two line
| average-psycho 4/23/12 . chapter 4
bittersweet. I like it. your strongest line is "and razor blades in my mind-" cant think of what else to say.
| bukangliwayway 4/23/12 . chapter 4
| Erlkoenigin 4/23/12 . chapter 3
Ein schönes, zärtliches Gedicht, das sich von strophe zu strophe steigert, gefällt mit sehr gut
| Ivriniel 4/23/12 . chapter 3
A wonderful poem. Again very nice images.
| Getuie 4/23/12 . chapter 3
The last two stanza's are HEAVENLY. Beautiful beyond description.
| Paperbag 4/23/12 . chapter 3
Wow, that was really beautiful. A smile can really invoke such emotion, and I think you truely captured it.
| Farewell-Twilight 4/23/12 . chapter 3
I liked the 'It jerks life’s black and white' comment.
Very sweet and well written
| Erlkoenigin 3/25/12 . chapter 2
Ein so positives Gedicht hätte ich von dir nicht erwartet!
Es gefällt mir ausgesprochen gut. Mit den vielen Wiederholungen, die das Gedciht so eindringlich machen könnte ich es mir als Lied vorstellen
| marshbar960 3/25/12 . chapter 2
another relatable poem, which i can identify with. you know, you sure have the courage to admit your foibles and the heart to inspire all of us to follow God's path. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| Rose Dark Thorn 3/25/12 . chapter 2
This is a very beautiful poem and I can feel that you put your whole heart into this. It is wonderfully written. :) As all of your work is usually wonderful.
| My Mental Disaster 3/25/12 . chapter 2
I almost feel embarassed, as if (and i am) looking in on somthing infinatly personal, a moment filled with uplifting feeling as well as the sisterlyness you seemed to have forged, you seem to make the two of you one. it has the feeling of the end of a tunnle, of that hopefull light...
| rotted reverie 3/25/12 . chapter 2
Your poetry owns...sorry, just had to say that ;
| Tears of a Warrior 3/25/12 . chapter 2
That was quite frankly amazing, so beautiful and I can tell it was straight from the heart. Wow!
| Ivriniel 3/25/12 . chapter 2
Wow, this is so beautiful!