*Actually crying* There are so many words swimming through my head at the mo. Wow. Holy Crap. OMG! Whoa.

That's really sad. It gave me shivers. Even now it's pretty powerful.

And that's all.

I probably told you that I like this one awhile ago... :)

man this really IS good

*shivers*

Oh my god, this is incredible. It tugs at my heart.

Moving, expressive and well-crafted. May you never have to be in a war. -m-

Wow. The last two lines...those blew me away. Nice job.

I think that if you hadn't rhymed so much, it would have been better. It had a good point, and I definately understand where it's coming from, but I don't like rhymes. It takes away from the point of the poem, and makes it seem almost... I don't know. Good job.
much love
Vintage Fade