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| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-08-19 ch 1, | abuseomg! that is so cute. guys are slow! *sigh* |
| SparklingStar25 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abusewow..this is really good! |
| aku-md 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseGood one! Love the whoa! part! haha! |
| emerald 2005-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abusenice...loved the ending:D...and i love the subtle physical contact idea btw...gotta try it out:D |
| pear23 2005-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abusesugoi!! i was shocked you mentioned takeshi in this one. i can imagine you being grace and myself as elaine.. hehehe |
| marina eyes 2005-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseso adorably cute! |
| Ginne 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. Gosh. I loved that story! It was amzing. In my opinion, I would love to see you go further with it, I'm really interested to know what would come next. |
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2005-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was hilariously enjoyable! To think.. it was him they were talking about. That was excellent! |
| ro-mackenzie 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abusethis is good |
| MaiMo 2004-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was great!no coments!! |
| E A King 2004-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad. The laguage at the end wasn't really needed, but oh well. Is this just a short story or is it the end? |
| MySecreT 2004-09-13 ch 1, | abuseo i like this...i like where it's going...hehe update soon! |
| weezy 2004-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that was a good ending. I hate it when writers assume you can't figure anything out and then beat you over the head with some big, elaborate explanation. My advice is leave it where it is. |
| weezy 2004-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that was a good ending. I hate it when writers assume you can't figure anything out and then beat you over the head with some big, elaborate explanation. My advice is leave it where it is. |
| Your Anti-Drug 2004-09-13 ch 1, | abuseOhh, I like. You don't often get stories in the guy POV and you made em proud :P |