 Hazelnut Romance 2008-08-19 . chapter 1omg! that is so cute. guys are slow! *sigh* |
 SparklingStar25 2008-04-04 . chapter 1wow..this is really good! |
 aku-md 2008-01-10 . chapter 1Good one! Love the whoa! part! haha! |
 emerald 2005-10-08 . chapter 1 nice...loved the ending:D...and i love the subtle physical contact idea btw...gotta try it out:D |
 pear23 2005-08-26 . chapter 1 sugoi!! i was shocked you mentioned takeshi in this one. i can imagine you being grace and myself as elaine.. hehehe |
 marina eyes 2005-08-12 . chapter 1 so adorably cute! |
 Ginne 2005-07-13 . chapter 1Oh. My. Gosh. I loved that story! It was amzing. In my opinion, I would love to see you go further with it, I'm really interested to know what would come next. |
 Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2005-01-05 . chapter 1That was hilariously enjoyable! To think.. it was him they were talking about. That was excellent! |
 ro-mackenzie 2004-12-12 . chapter 1this is good |
 MaiMo 2004-09-16 . chapter 1 that was great!no coments!! |
 E A King 2004-09-15 . chapter 1 Not bad. The laguage at the end wasn't really needed, but oh well. Is this just a short story or is it the end? |
 MySecreT 2004-09-13 . chapter 1o i like this...i like where it's going...hehe update soon! |
 weezy 2004-09-13 . chapter 1 I thought that was a good ending. I hate it when writers assume you can't figure anything out and then beat you over the head with some big, elaborate explanation. My advice is leave it where it is. |
 weezy 2004-09-13 . chapter 1 I thought that was a good ending. I hate it when writers assume you can't figure anything out and then beat you over the head with some big, elaborate explanation. My advice is leave it where it is. |
 Your Anti-Drug 2004-09-13 . chapter 1Ohh, I like. You don't often get stories in the guy POV and you made em proud :P |