My favorite of your poems, as of now. You definitely have a talent. Thank you for all of your feedback for my own poems, and this review wasn't inspired by your kind words but I'm really speaking what I feel for your poetry.

with all due respect,

Energy

I like this but it seems too simple. It needs more detail.

This is really good. I really like the last bit, about a shattered dream and never understanding what love really means. nice work
-silent rain-

Yes I must admit been there... funny thing about love... a lot of times (for now at least) it's love one way, until it finally works out, and someone loves you back... then it's amazing... short but sweet and cute... keep writing