 Fleeting Moment 2007-09-22 . chapter 4OMG! UPDATE! |
 Tecna 2007-09-09 . chapter 4This is an awesome story, you really have to update, it's amazing! Please update asap, from the looks of things you haven't updated for more than 2 years now. This story is fantastic and I want to know what happens next. Update asap!
Tecna ;) |
 lippo 2006-02-24 . chapter 4 please update soon! i love this story, those two have such chemistry together...please update! |
 WB32 2005-10-02 . chapter 4 nice story, you should update it when you get the chance. |
 litwit 2005-05-13 . chapter 4 i have three words to say to you:
effin
luv
it! omg u totally rock my sox off |
 sexyz-bratz 2005-02-14 . chapter 4oh! bad bad bad Kali! killing her futre husband...tsk tsk tsk! but it was a really funny chapter!! good thing your back! hope you don't dissapear again |
 Shahr 2005-02-05 . chapter 4*pleads* he is alive, right, right? Oh god. WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
 Julia 2005-02-05 . chapter 1 Interesting. By the way, I love the sentence, "You two sound like an old married couple," because my brother had said that about me and one of our friends. Or rather, "You two sound like an bickering old married couple." We do fight, but I doubt anything will ever come of it. Nice story so far! |
 Deafgurl's world 2005-02-05 . chapter 4Wow! Arlie and Kali going to get marry. Poor Kali. How come Kali live with her nanny? What happened to her parents? Oh no, will Arlie alright? Poor Kali. Hurry update soon. |
 Black-Haired-Beauty 2005-02-04 . chapter 4hey great story please keep it coming it sounds really good! they have to fall in love!
Megan |
 city-gal7 2005-02-04 . chapter 4that was a suprise!! i thought they hated each other when they were young..but then they were hugging!! that was so sweet! and u FINALLY updated! good...hope you don't dissapear again okay? |
 Blue Eyes 2005-02-04 . chapter 4 This story is great so far. I love the funny plot line and the interesting characters and setting. I do, however, have a few suggestions.
1) Try not to overuse information we already know. Example: Telling us about Kali's eyes and hair (same for Arlie). It's okay to use this a little, but not too much.
2) TOO MUCH FIGHTING!! I THINK I'M GOING TO SCREAM!!
Other than those things it's an overall good story. Update soon, please!
~*~blue eyes~*~ |
 chinx 2005-02-04 . chapter 4does he have a concusion or something? if he does, then this would b a great time to check out his abs. lol! update soon! |
 CoOkIe MoNsTeR 2005-01-23 . chapter 3 Where the hell are you? updte this story girl! its gonna get intresting between them isn't it?? *nudge, nudge*...I will personally hunt u down and kill u if u do not update...i have my connections. ^_^...please update okay?? okay! |
 sexyz-bratz 2005-01-07 . chapter 3ooh...sounds good so far.. PLEASE PLEASE update this story. (begging on my knees) It's really intresting. Never though i'd see a princess slap the prince. PLEASE update... or tell me if its cancelled okay?? |