awesome piece.

Religion sucks. Well... relgions based around wroship of an entity that created the universe with no factual evidence to prove it, suck. i hope, in the context of this poem, you've seen this and are moving on to more "enlightened" religions, buddis, or daoism. But that's jsut my philosophy...
You had great imagry in this, I really liked that aspect of it, but the language was a bit simplistic...
All in all, it was pretty spiffy.