You definitely painted a picture of how we all felt when we were young, facing the dark corridor on the route to safety! -Write on! ..

c'est tres bien!

I'ld love to see more children get some applause, not just in general but individually too.

I can't write it enough. Kids are great! Children are the future and the light! Even though I'm middle-age, I'm still a child!

Well, maybe I'll leave the writing to you.

that was cute but haunting at the same time. Well done!

Its a cute poem but the first line makes no sence "If I when i am frightened"