wow - and you reviewed MY poem and LIKED it? this is wonderful. i haven`t written in a while, so i`m still a little sketchy, but this is certainly worthy of praise. wonderful poem.

I like it alot,
lots of shallow truth in this song/poem
i love it

This poem is beautiful, it's distrurbing, but that's what makes it so wonderful. It touches your soul, and makes your heart shiver a bit. When someone can put words together and make you feel something, then it's a truly powerful writer/poet. This is a wonderful poem, just fantastic.