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| CrazyCowgirl101 2008-08-20 ch 29,  | abuseOh my goodnes! What a wonderful story! I love it! The only suggestion that i have is when some one breaks off their sentance or is interupted use this: "Theron--" "No don't say anything!" or: "I wish i knew the truth . . ." this make make it easier to understand. But other wise and excellant book. Ver creative and active. can't wait to read teh next. |
| tundra101 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseuuh no offense but this seems to be a rip off of baulder's gate it's probably a good story so i'll keep reading |
| SilvinArrow 2006-12-15 ch 21, | abuseAH! This seems to end abruptly! Hm, I see you have another installment, so I'll go look at that one. This is a wonderful story. Characters are well crafted and there is a nice movement to where this is going. I can't wait to read more! -SA-> |
| justine dayea 2006-04-16 ch 14, | abuseYou left a very BIG cliffhanger over there dearie... but then that makes your story irresistable.. -melai |
| BeautifulSin 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abusenice story.. totally impressed! |
| Caution 2005-08-30 ch 13, anon. | abuseAh, yes, and I =tayed up 12 hours to read this! |
| Caution 2005-08-30 ch 14, anon. | abuseYou had me crying at the end. |
| Uncle-Al2 2005-01-27 ch 4, | abuseI cannot believe no one else has reviewed this story! Marvelous characters, tremendous battles, incredible conflicts, and a very interesting plotline. You may be playing the pathos a bit heavy, and the Clintonesqe chastity rings wrond. Many unfaithful wives, don't husbands cheat too? Really looking forwards to the next Arywan Series! Thanks for sharing! |