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Reviews For: Arywan Series: The Children of Naaram

CrazyCowgirl101
2008-08-20
ch 29,
abuseOh my goodnes! What a wonderful story! I love it! The only suggestion that i have is when some one breaks off their sentance or is interupted use this:

"Theron--"
"No don't say anything!"

or:

"I wish i knew the truth . . ."

this make make it easier to understand. But other wise and excellant book. Ver creative and active. can't wait to read teh next.
tundra101
2008-05-06
ch 2,
abuseuuh no offense
but this seems to be a rip off
of baulder's gate it's probably a good story
so i'll keep reading
SilvinArrow
2006-12-15
ch 21,
abuseAH! This seems to end abruptly! Hm, I see you have another installment, so I'll go look at that one. This is a wonderful story. Characters are well crafted and there is a nice movement to where this is going. I can't wait to read more!

-SA->
justine dayea
2006-04-16
ch 14,
abuseYou left a very BIG cliffhanger over there dearie...

but then that makes your story irresistable..

-melai
BeautifulSin
2005-11-11
ch 1,
abusenice story.. totally impressed!
Caution
2005-08-30
ch 13, anon.
abuseAh, yes, and I =tayed up 12 hours to read this!
Caution
2005-08-30
ch 14, anon.
abuseYou had me crying at the end.
Uncle-Al2
2005-01-27
ch 4,
abuseI cannot believe no one else has reviewed this story! Marvelous characters, tremendous battles, incredible conflicts, and a very interesting plotline. You may be playing the pathos a bit heavy, and the Clintonesqe chastity rings wrond. Many unfaithful wives, don't husbands cheat too? Really looking forwards to the next Arywan Series! Thanks for sharing!
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