 hail the heartbreakers 2009-06-18 . chapter 9OK, you need to learn the difference between past and passed. |
 CrazyCowgirl101 2008-08-20 . chapter 29Oh my goodnes! What a wonderful story! I love it! The only suggestion that i have is when some one breaks off their sentance or is interupted use this:
"Theron--"
"No don't say anything!"
or:
"I wish i knew the truth . . ."
this make make it easier to understand. But other wise and excellant book. Ver creative and active. can't wait to read teh next. |
 tundra101 2008-05-06 . chapter 2uuh no offense
but this seems to be a rip off
of baulder's gate it's probably a good story
so i'll keep reading |
 SilvinArrow 2006-12-15 . chapter 21AH! This seems to end abruptly! Hm, I see you have another installment, so I'll go look at that one. This is a wonderful story. Characters are well crafted and there is a nice movement to where this is going. I can't wait to read more!
-SA-> |
 justine dayea 2006-04-16 . chapter 14You left a very BIG cliffhanger over there dearie...
but then that makes your story irresistable..
-melai |
 BeautifulSin 2005-11-11 . chapter 1nice story.. totally impressed! |
 Caution 2005-08-30 . chapter 13 Ah, yes, and I =tayed up 12 hours to read this! |
 Caution 2005-08-30 . chapter 14 You had me crying at the end. |
 Uncle-Al2 2005-01-27 . chapter 4I cannot believe no one else has reviewed this story! Marvelous characters, tremendous battles, incredible conflicts, and a very interesting plotline. You may be playing the pathos a bit heavy, and the Clintonesqe chastity rings wrond. Many unfaithful wives, don't husbands cheat too? Really looking forwards to the next Arywan Series! Thanks for sharing! |