 I-e-m-s 2005-02-13 . chapter 1I like this Haiku. Pretty well said about remebering something very vivid it's as if it did happen yesterday lolz |
 David Stephen 2004-10-17 . chapter 1This is a brilliant haiku which feels real and flows spectacularly...the words are not forced and everything flows beautifully. Well done! ~David~ |
 twilightwriter07 2004-09-13 . chapter 1I know the feeling all too well...nicely done. =) |
 Infamous Writer 2004-09-13 . chapter 1Yes! You finally updated! Anyway... I'm trying to figure out what this was influenced by, but can't quite find it yet. Well you do have a way with haikus as you have a way with stories. Keep on writing, Will, even if the rest of the world doesn't like your stuff. I certainly like your work. ~I.W. |
 Flying Mango Bean Tackler. 2004-09-13 . chapter 1First thought = FIGHTING ON THE FORUM!
LoL, I remember it like it was yesterday, I remember most of the things that have happened on the forum like it was yesterday . . .
but yeah that's my first thought and the first thought is usually what the story or poem gets based around for that particular reader right?
Yeah. . Good Job=D
-Lost |