Aww. That made me cry. Really sweet poem. **BRAVO!!**
~*~DooWopBop~*~

i love this poem... and don't say you're not good at writing, because you are! and no one starts out good. you'll see yourself improve, yeah? the description brings out the emotion very well, and i think this is a job well done. it feels very real... and to write something that others can relate to is the first step to becoming better. ;) keep it up.