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| Elizabeth Hemingway 2004-09-13 ch 1,  | abuseI am admiring the way that the you choose a different word to succeed each sentence in your poem, it gives off a feeling of grace that other poems don't have. |
| Youkai Author 2004-09-13 ch 1, | abuseOriginal in that it's a sad poem that doesn't focus on suicide. I liked the presentation. |
| Gothic Spook 2004-09-13 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Very powerful! Especialy with the single words after each sentence! It had a nice flow and was written very well! Well done! |
| freak161 2004-09-13 ch 1, | abusewow. im lost for words...great writing keep it up lots of love irish_goth |