konichiwa

what part of japan do you live in?right now i'm in okinawa, japan, and i thought it was cool that someone on here was japanese.

see ya aroundarigato

Wow! That was deepish! I don't think I've ever read anything this deep, and I write deep poetry, and this one surpasses even me! I think this has something to do with death or destruction, but I can't really tell. Anyway, pretty decent. Bryan

it is fabulors and you should do more stuff like this

Yai. Uh...I think this would work better as some other kind of poem, so you could explain what's going on. Gore is fine, as long as it's in some kind of context.

i like the relation to the thimble and the string, thats pretty good

That really reminds me of this scene in The Ring. But I'm not comparing your writing to a stupid horrow movie, I'm just thinking about how much better some of the movies I've seen would be with the use of your skills. Oh yeah, girl, you sure do have some writing skill. :P

That really reminds me of this scene in The Ring. But I'm not comparing your writing to a stupid horrow movie, I'm just thinking about how much better some of the movies I've seen would be with the use of your skills. Oh yeah, girl, you sure do have some writing skill. :P

w00t! soo cool!
(and you didnt even tell me to review this one)