wut is that supposed to mean...it makes no sense, yet is totally clear at the same time...how do you come up with things like that? wow!

Nice poem! Loved the metaphor, 'twas brilliant. You're such a good poet. Keep up the good work!

This was a great poem. It's impactful. It represents so much. Wow...that's great.

This is so poetic. Lot's of imagery which is good and easy to follow. Good work.