Um, this was very interesting, where did you get your inspiration? Anyhow, I like it but it does seem kind of random... Good Job, I like the way it ends.

Ohh... very spooky, but in a good way. Very ghostly, and you represent the situation well (not that I KNOW how the situation would be like... I haven't died... yet...) Great writing style, and the rhyming was great. For suggestions? Maybe you could add a few more question marks because I saw a few and I think they should be put after them. Even so, great job. Keep up the great work!!