Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Zodiac Boarding School

Damaged
2004-09-16
ch 1,
Hmm ... this prologue could use a little more detail (again, instead of typing "7" type "seven" since it's a number below ten ... just a thought) but other than that, it's a great settup for the story. Keep it up!
Vagrance
2004-09-14
ch 1,
Interesting characters so far. Too early to comment.
Return to Top