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| Damaged 2004-09-16 ch 1, | Hmm ... this prologue could use a little more detail (again, instead of typing "7" type "seven" since it's a number below ten ... just a thought) but other than that, it's a great settup for the story. Keep it up! |
| Vagrance 2004-09-14 ch 1, | Interesting characters so far. Too early to comment. |