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| Saki Hanajima 2008-05-25 ch 1,   | This was Perfect- those are definetely feelings I get. Especially "squeezing jelly-nimble through a narrow tube" - totally. |
| Yuki no Mitsukai 2004-09-16 ch 1, | High School = um... the gate and the air...? Dunno... Nice poem, flows smoothly. It seems like the octopus stanza and the candle stanza are two seperate poems though. |