Wow! That was really emotional and dark – just the way I like it. :) Excellent, excellent story.

OK, guilt trip time. I posted a story called "Photonegative" about a week ago, and I don't have any feedback yet. Please read? Thanks!

"Depressing sad miserable disheartening discouraging gloomy dismal disappointing depress cheerless heartbreaking distressing poignant" That about sums it up from my MS thesaurus. But a wonderfully well written story.

writing this would have helped relieve the pain

as for the piece itself- whenever you do dark, angsty tragedy, the writing becomes so unearthly and hauntingly beautiful...passionate...

This had a nice feel to it good job, if you can please check out some of my stuff.

UGH.
Ugh.
Ouch. Awful. Taste. In. My. Mouth. Why. Did. You. Do. That? Ugh. Amazing piece, dudette, as usual when you aim for this kinda thing. Though I think the beginning was a little rushed. But that's just because I wanna know more about Galina, and you're limiting me to the present moment on purpose, right? Eck. I need some chocolate if you'll excuse me... Amazing bit, horribly distubing, but amazing.