 Ephemeral Seraphim 2006-03-04 . chapter 8Oh my.
The interaction between Serenity and Alec is well played, and you never cease to amaze me with your delightful storytelling. And...you left us at a cliffhanger! *cries* I'm just dying to know what happens next. Serenity roxxors in this chapter...she's turned into a total badass >:)~ Your chapters are short and sweet, and they manage to fill the reader's voracious appetite with satisfaction. I'm sure that you will grace us with another chapter that won't fail to astound us. :)
chibichocobo |
 Ephemeral Seraphim 2006-03-04 . chapter 7Ooh, looks like there's drama in this chapter. Me likies :) Overall, this has nice flowing prose, great characters, a little bit of action on the side, add all these ingredients together, and we have another great addition of a chapter in KonekOniko's story, Corps et ame. I liked the italicized sequence in the chapter, it added an extra layer of drama (which I happen to be so fond of :) hehe)
Final notes?
Excellent work.
chibichocobo |
 Ephemeral Seraphim 2006-03-04 . chapter 6Oh goodness, looks like I've got a lot of reviews to pass out to everybody. I'm lagging behind in everything ^^;;
But anyways, I wanted to drop you a review and thank you for reviewing my story. It is muchly appreciated.
Also, I see that you have been updating quite a lot ever since I was on my, er, hiatus. I've got to hand it to you, this is another great read, and I'm glad to see an update on this story. And, hehe, I think that this story is humerous along with having an interesting storyline. Just a little note, is that there were just a couple spelling errors, nothing that a little bit of editing can't do. But, all in all, it was a great read, and this proves why you're on my favorite authors list :)
chibichocobo |
 Ice and Snow 2006-01-08 . chapter 8heyy! what do you mean it's weak? jeez...don't be so ** yourself (or maybe you should if you want that occupation...) it's really interesting. =D most people die in mine's...a nice change of reading for me. look at the bright side. at least it's not corny...
Maybe it's a bit cliche? |
 Kakyou Takashiro 2006-01-07 . chapter 8hm. delicious. another great read. delightful to the end. ^^ more please.
kakyou |
 poetic abortion 2006-01-07 . chapter 8I just love this, Sumi. I just can not get enough of your jubulent prose!
~* noelle |
 Kakyou Takashiro 2006-01-01 . chapter 7yes! thank you for the first delightful read of the new years! ^^ expecting nothing less on the next post. ^^ you always deliver something.
kakyou |
 Mitsuki 2005-10-08 . chapter 1 Ara! SUGOI DESU! ^_^
I just read about 10 sentences and I'm already hooked! How come you never told me you write stories when we were in school? @.@
Keep up the creativeness! [jeez is that even a word?] Hope you don't mind me popping in and reading your stories. :]
.:Sal:. |
 poetic abortion 2005-09-22 . chapter 7sumi-chan, your talent is wonderful as ever. this is just so quick and witty, I love it. you write so well.
~* noelle |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-09-20 . chapter 7Wow, what can i say? i'm hooked~~
keep writing! |
 Rogue-of-Fortune 2005-09-19 . chapter 1This is an interesting story.I will read more of it when I get the time.
But one thing: "Blades of Blood"? Sounds like you took a few ideas from other anime series (I mean, the English Dub of Inuyasha uses those exact words...). Not that that's a bad thing... ^^;;
Anyway, keep it up! ^_^ |
 MegumiReisui 2005-09-18 . chapter 7omg a youkai!? |
 negligible fictional force 2004-12-25 . chapter 6yay yay yay. i love the way this story is planned! it really flows and i love it! ahahaha. i like brendan. he's just so... weird. ahahaha. continue uploading! -kismet. |
 poetic abortion 2004-12-02 . chapter 6@__@ I love this !! I can't wait for the next chapter !! ^-^ Are Serenity and Alec a cuploe ? ^.~ Alec reminds me of Inu Yasha. ::drools:: =) I like this so much !! UPDATE ! XD
~ Noelle ~ |
 negligible fictional force 2004-11-29 . chapter 5oh! yay! yay!do we get to see youkai serenity?i can't wait.eeps.hm. emil and rena are getting along nicely,and ivan is cool too.bahaha. the time is right!for what? bahh. i can't wait.i'm going hyperactive.-kismet. |