Lovely, friendship is indeed always too young to die.

I love your poetry because your images are always so clear and distinct. Keep up the great work, dear :)

Nice poem, I love the sentence "friensship is always too young to die" - it's so true. You created a good poem around that concept.

That was so beautiful! Made me cry, really.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile... my bad. love it, very nice.

-Sella

That tears will melt the snows of years is all we know of life. m
p.s. A wonderful threnody.

M. Too true, too true. It's always a sad thing when friends are seperated by life and death.
~Serene Waters

Excelent, poetic, captivating, moving, sad

aww, a nice new angle of friendship!
I shall remember the title to tell my friends when they get distant from me.

beautiful sentiment, I like how the peoem takes several verse forms, it's neither 1 style or another...very brave. I may look at that style myself. I get the feeling the old man would have approved. thank you for sharing it.

Wow, that was really sweet and heartfelt; I totally agree. The last stanza was bursting with both images and emotions, and a startling contrast.
And thank you for taking the time to read so many of my works - I'm glad you enjoy them. And I'm glad you like Marius, too, he's awesome ;D Email me sometime at flanje01@gettysburg.edu if you want!