so original! i absoloutely love it

i really like the entire format and tone of this story. great job! i hope you finish it since i'm jonesing for another chapter.

this is laugh-out-loud hilarious! and exciting! and- what on earth could possibly have prevented you from posting the last chapter?! 2005, my god!

..did you die?!

wow, you style is really strange. i couldn't even get into it. you should try to write differently. you have good ideas but your way of writing is totally off. sorry if i insulted you.

Oh...

I really loved this story !!

Please update SOONER !!

I would love to hear from the THREE again, AIDEN, LOGAN and NATHAN !!

I loved Nathan in the Sip or Strip chapter, when they made out

I loved this so much, so please update, one chapter then its done

Wow. This scene was fantastic because it was so horribly akward!! (Twist the words around it's a compliment I promise) Poor Logan...too bad Aiden doesn't want love.

The style threw me off for a few seconds but this is incredibly good...nice job!

This is the first story i have ever read that is written as a script, and i can say i am definately not disappointed.

This was so good, i loved every minute of it.

this was awesome. i thought it was really funny and interesting. though aiden really confuses me...i still Love him tho. :) cant wait to read the ending.

PLEASE! Finish this! Just one more chapter!!

You know, this was the only fiction that stuck in my head for several years. I stopped checking for like, 3 years or so and when I came back this was the first thing I wanted to find and could not find. I kept doing searches bearing Aiden and Logan's names to no avail until tonight when I did it through Google. I really love your story and I hope you'll update this sooner. I'll try to wait for that before reading this again. One of the best stories I've read.

love this style of writing, I'm thrilled to read on

Oh my god! I ** loved it.
I've never read a story written a script/movie sort of way.
It was kind of...great. I loved how it was written.
And I laughed, like actually full out burst into laughters reading this.

I just wish you'd finish...ah, oh well.
Loved it anyway, finished or unfinished.

** magnificent piece of writing you have here.
If it was a movie I'd see it about a million times in succession.

Hm.. I see you never wrote the last chapter... oh, well... at least it ends with them kissing. We can imagine hot sex scene+"I love you/ I love you too", though I would have loved to read them (did I tell you that you're style is great?) :)

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Grandpa was so cool... sniff, sniff...