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Iuno 2008-09-27 ch 12,	abuseYou know, this was the only fiction that stuck in my head for several years. I stopped checking for like, 3 years or so and when I came back this was the first thing I wanted to find and could not find. I kept doing searches bearing Aiden and Logan's names to no avail until tonight when I did it through Google. I really love your story and I hope you'll update this sooner. I'll try to wait for that before reading this again. One of the best stories I've read.
Would not Could not in a Bo... 2008-08-26 ch 1,	abuselove this style of writing, I'm thrilled to read on
PindrakeCake 2008-04-22 ch 12,	abuseOh my god! I loved it. I've never read a story written a script/movie sort of way. It was kind of...great. I loved how it was written. And I laughed, like actually full out burst into laughters reading this. I just wish you'd finish...ah, oh well. Loved it anyway, finished or unfinished. magnificent piece of writing you have here. If it was a movie I'd see it about a million times in succession.
frolic-horror 2008-04-22 ch 12,	abuseHm.. I see you never wrote the last chapter... oh, well... at least it ends with them kissing. We can imagine hot sex scene+"I love you/ I love you too", though I would have loved to read them (did I tell you that you're style is great?) :) Frolic Horror
frolic-horror 2008-04-22 ch 11,	abuseGrandpa was so cool... sniff, sniff...
frolic-horror 2008-04-22 ch 6,	abuseOh my God... the scene in the showers is so funny... my eyes are teary from so much laughter. I love your writing style!!
i-see-faeries 2008-04-01 ch 12,	abuseGasp! You didn't finish it, just when it was getting good. At first, they format ** me off a little, but then I got into it and the story. I love it! :D Totally cute without being cliche, well not overly cliche. So cute, but you haven't updated. Update soon? I love this.
firedraygon97 2008-01-18 ch 12,	abuseFinally! Haha, I really love the smart-** comments from Aiden. The bantering in this is so wonderful. Great work. Please do write more soon! ~fd97
Duuude 2007-12-28 ch 9,	abuseYes! He's having doubts! WEE! Heheh. Anyway.. yeah Nathan was pretty rude to Anna right then.. but they got over it so.. yeah. Yeah, Aiden's 'diet humour', it wasn't funny xD. Probably why he got blank stares.. Hahah. And the awkwardness in the morning.. heheh. it made me laugh.. Especially when he thought Nathan said, "saturn has leather seats?". He hears funny things! Just like me! I thought it was only me xD I like Anna. xD random note. Onwards, we go.
Duuude 2007-12-28 ch 8,	abuseHooh. That was hot.. Nathan and Aiden whoda thought, eh? And passing out on each other too.. Awkwardness in the morning xD> Oh yes.. Nathan is hilarious.. "She wants your ", xD.. wow. Aiden's reaction is even funnier. That's what I say too.. when people say crazy things I would never say.. Like for example "she wants your **".. ! Haha. wow.. you are genius, indeed. keep em comin.. =]
Duuude 2007-12-28 ch 7,	abuseOH God.. Aiden's really too funny.. The ways he was trying to imagine what to say to Logan... pure genius, I tell you. You, the writer, must have an awesome sense of humour to have written this seriously.. WOW. I wish this story was longer.. =[
Duuude 2007-12-28 ch 12,	abuseI really love your style of writing.. it's supposed to be like a screenplay, am I right? Anyway, it's very original. Oh and all of the character's have an amazing sense of humour. Especially Aiden's family.. his mother and his grandpa, yeah they had me laughing for quite a while. Nathan's pretty funny too, they're little thing.. yeah, it was hot. Although I do like Anna's choice of words better, you know 'romp' sounds much better. xD She and Nathan match and her slashfic contests and stuff.. icing on the cake. Really they're all funny... the story's great and I'm really glad his grandfather stopped him from following through with his promise. Gosh. I love this story. Btw, Logan should get Aiden drunk more often. Aww.. the next chapter's the last? I hope it's filled with Aiden and Logan continuing their make-out sessions! Haha. I'll be awaiting the next chapter.. =]
Back of Beyond 2007-12-19 ch 12,	abuseYou announce that the next chapter is the last...then you don't update for two years! That is so cruel. D: Anyway, love this story, hope you get around to writing the last chapter sometime. :[
kath 2007-10-15 ch 12, anon.	abuseseveral times i passed over this cuz of the format but then today i was like why the hell not, i must have been feeling adventurous ... probably the lack of sleep, but anywho, it goes back to how all the stories i seem to especially enjoy are ones i look over several times before i finally read it because this, though it took a bit of getting used to at first, was pretty cool. it was cute and hilarious (i kept laughing out loud which always makes my mom and brother wonder a little) and just ... i don't know, fun i guess. course seeing that the next chapter is the last and that you haven't updated in years is a tad agravating ... not that i can judge. i'm an awful updater. realy awful. okay ... that whole nonsensical spiel was practically one sentence which shows i really need to go to bed. uh yeah.
Nub in Denial 2007-07-30 ch 12,	abuseWhen I first started this my thoughts about the formatting were 'wtf?' But soon they turned to 'omg this rocks.' Now I'm hooked. It's almost like the reader is honestly watching a movie. It flows and plays out so smoothly. The transitions make sense and the writing style is a lot of fun. It's definitely original and I love the witty conversations! You are amazing. Seriously. 'Cause this story effin rocks. I can't wait for the next installation, though I'm sad that it'll be the last D: Laterz and keep up the mind-numbingly joygasmic writing!

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