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| Kenesis X 2004-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseMan there is alot of truth behind that song, btw nice job luvin it and too bad for soldiers huh? it a f* UP SYSTEM (the government and war) If u ask me SlipAway |
| Ecryptic 2004-09-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was a pretty cool song. Sounds like it could of been on Fear Factory's Soul of a New Machine. The only problem I have is with the lines Soldier food in my sack Soldier bed in my tent I don't know why. It just sound like it belongs. Maybe you could change it, but besides that little thing, you made a pretty good song. Hope to see more in the future from you. |