That is amazing. What did you do? It is so great, so profound, yet so short. I am in awe.

I think this is a brilliant story. Wonderful messages. It illustrates just how frustrating people can be - especially when you are trying to delier a message.
Although it may not be deliberate, there are many layers to this, and I enjoyed them immensely.

kinda odd but still pretty good. Great way of looking at life

breath taking, it made me want to cry and smile, very poetic and true of the world, deep also.

Wow... that was just... wow.

I really liked it.

Very creepy... and awesome.

this would make an awsome story if you wrote more on it, i think i actually might of understood it but i'm not quiet sure

This is really good. Interesting...but good. I like the whole thing about the person not wanting people to think that she's dead.

-10/10- I loved it. It seems cryptic, and haunting in a way. I would have signed this, but I don't have a name (all the good ones are taken!) Keep up the good work, and finish your other stories too, please?

aww, inspirational!

that was interestin :)