 Out-Of-Reality 2005-04-19 . chapter 1Makes me wonder who "You" is. There's like a desperation to have someone comfort you. I loved it, even in the sadnes sit was written. |
 David Stephen 2004-12-23 . chapter 1Absolutely fabulous, as usual. ~DS~ |
 Bleeding Beauty 2004-11-27 . chapter 1great! this is amazing! i love it! |
 StarrzAngel 2004-09-23 . chapter 1VERY nicely written! You wrote all the emotions and such incredibly well. Great job, again! |
 ZiggyGurl 2004-09-19 . chapter 1Great job! You are a great writer! |