 David Stephen 2004-12-23 . chapter 1So short.So simple.So effective!So amazing!So talented!So GENIUS!SO YOU!~DS~ |
 Triona :) 2004-10-04 . chapter 1 thats a really good poem short and simple:) |
 StarrzAngel 2004-09-22 . chapter 1I should've reviewed this a lot sooner. Sorry... Anyhoo, I really liked this poem! It seemed a little short, though. I still really like it! Great job, as usual! |
 twilightwriter07 2004-09-19 . chapter 1Interesting write...love the last two lines. =) |
 Ovaia Pelosa 2004-09-19 . chapter 1nice. |
 ronin 2004-09-17 . chapter 1 No, not really a haiku, but interesting enough. I love the rhythm and feel of it- s'got a bounce. And I guess you're right about the poem, for all of ten minutes. |
 Manuel Fajar 2004-09-16 . chapter 1Wonderful, it's always best to never underestimate the power of peso-nality. -m- |
 Serfious 2004-09-15 . chapter 1Not really a Haiku, but it's good. R/R my stuff if you get the chance. |