Hey, that's awesome. I understand it all in some way. Really well written. Just reviewing this because I hadn't before (I plan on reviewing all your stuff eventually :) So it turns out my sister has messenger so I could still get on it the whole time (just not as much) but yeah I felt like a ** when I figured out she had it. :) Anyway, thanks so much for the review. Yeah that was about Nathan. Now he has taken to not talking about it with me at all because we always start fighting. We watched Farenheit 9/11 (I've accepted the fact that I will never spell that word correctly :) and god it was really powerful. I almost cried at some parts just thinking about how powerless I feel (or maybe how powerless I *am*) and how worried. I think Nathan did get sort of freaked out by it (especially the parts that showed the kids and people in the hospitals bleeding and everything) but then he told me that it probably isn't like that now. But I hate to tell him that it *is* still like that because I watch the news and I hear the stories and hardly anything has calmed down over there. Anyway I'm starting to ramble but this is just so frustrating! But enough about it. How are you and Brendan? I can't wait for an update of Quartz Sight. I am gonna start a new story after we move probably. (we upped the moving date to this sunday) Well, this is getting REALLY long so I guess I'll get going now. Email me if you can! It's great hearing from you! :) ~Abigail

Brilliant! ~DS~

Interesting take on the subject of making choices. Subtle hinting on part of speaker. Nice touches. =]
-Cindy Moon *)

*applauds* Great job, again! You have such talent in writing poetry, AND stories!

i like it. i like the ruler/crueller rhyme. Truth IS harsh, no doubt about it.