 Syluna 2004-10-01 . chapter 2 Why do all your characters live in trailers? Well, not all, but this is the second one, and both make a big deal out of it. Hee hee, did you get the dagger idea from my athame?
This girl reminds me of something a friend of mine said.. er... "I'm sick of all these stuck up goths. 'oh my god, my mom should totally die. She took away my black eyeliner! Can you believe that?'
Oh, this is so good! I likie, I likie! So, the blood allows him to free himself? Or something?
Ooh, I know you have a ton to do, but I'm dying for the next chappie! |
 Dayla 2004-09-20 . chapter 2 As me mom always said; you don't have to live in a trailer to be trailer trash.
I *really* like this story! ::Giggle:: I wonder what the poor girl's gonna do now that she has a cute lil' dryad-boy to herself? Just so you know, I did not mean that in a perverted sense...
His POV next? Please? By tomorrow? Please? |
 Tachyon 2004-09-18 . chapter 2Now we've got the second character, good, move them along now . . .
A lot of your stories start out like this, telling separate stories of each main character until their paths converge. In a way, with your converging stories and reused characters themselves, you entire writing is just the fabric of a universe of convergences. A very nice scope, yet you don't forget the details, most of the time. |
 Tachyon 2004-09-18 . chapter 1Good start, I like historical fiction.
I thought that in most myths dryads were only females though . . . |
 Darwin 2004-09-17 . chapter 2m...and the plot thickens (Somehow I knew her blood would bring about an event such as this!)
And I agree it is not where you live it is how you act...^_^
Good start looking forward to more!
Darwin |
 Darwin 2004-09-17 . chapter 1Hm... another intriguing and quite twisted tale!
I am very interested to see just what you have in store for our wayward and very greedy human.
gonna read the next!
Darwin |
 Tobaeus 2004-09-17 . chapter 2Why did she take a dagger with her? |
 LaughingAstarael 2004-09-16 . chapter 1That is... insanely cool. The pacing and imagery are beautiful, amazing... ^_^ Very nice!
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~~Mera |
 Tobaeus 2004-09-16 . chapter 1A good start. A little research will go a long way. I can't remember if steel was actually produced in the 1700's... |