Great Story!

this is one of the few sires that keep me voming back i think its wounderfoul

Well it took me a while to finish up both S.O.L and F.A, but I finally did and I think that the series is well written. I really like how you make it so that its not cliche and fairy tale endings and blah blah, y'know that kind of stuff. I think the characters take a while to grow on you though, not an immediate "Oh, he's my favourite!" I realy love the dialogue too though, the things they say makes you really think here and than. I hope you start writing more or I unno, because I want to see what happens next. To be honest I was sort of happy that Keith and Radley broke up, I didn't think it would've been long term anyways. For some reason though, I want Radley and Jessie to get together, I wasn't surprised to know he had a crush on him in F.A, I think you dropped quite a few hints throughout the series so far. Sorry I didn't review by each chapter or series, I thought may as well leave a long review in the end once I'm done reading them. Took me about..hmm 2 hours but well worth it I say! It's good how you do different povs because it gives varying takes on one situation, and delves into the personalities of each character by how they react essentially. Well done and I do hope you continue this, but if not...It was a great read while it lasted!

I'm honestly surprised there aren't any reviews for this yet. At first, I was a little unsure whether I liked the series or not, but the characters all began to grow on me and I've now just spent half my morning reading both the second part and what you have of this part done. I really hope you plan to continue this, it's a good story that really makes you like the characters and really doesn't try to hide everything under a fairy-tale romance. This is such an awesome story, I hope to see more!