Reviews for A most profound statement Swearing evident

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asphyxiated 2005-03-06 ch 1,	abuseThanks for reviewing my poem, I thought I'd return the favor.This is just brilliant, quite funny! Well done with it :)
swe8273 2005-02-20 ch 1,	abuseBravo! Very entertaining!
Coping Mechanism 2005-01-05 ch 1,	abuseOh, very good. It was funny, but not laugh out loud funny. Cool story tho.
strawberryred 2004-11-26 ch 1,	abuseThere seems to be a running pattern in all your work... (you think?!). Very original idea, I really like it, very Twilight Zone. The countdown was a nice bit of writing, as was the concluding sentence. (You're good at those). You might want to cut down the stuff at the beginning, you know, the dialogue, I know its funny, but I think black humor would be more appropriate. And it detracts a little from the overall focus, y'know? The story's a bit scattered... you need maybe a little more to tie it together? I do love the concept though, its absolutely brilliant!
Bragi 2004-10-15 ch 1,	abuseYou were right. I laughed. Ha. It was good, they're all good, I've run out of synonyms for the word "good" to put in all of my reviews. And grown tired of dolling out compliment like free twinkies. If any of your stories suck, I'll tell you, let's leave it at that. I expect to you be reviewed for this. Perhaps you ought to wait until my next poem is on the web.
Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2004-10-14 ch 1,	abuseOh! OH! So you don't accept anonymous reviews?? Jeez. I had to log in because of you. I hope you feel unbelievably and unbearably guilty. Story was good. You really don't deserve a long, descriptive explanation of why it was good because I'm sure you already KNOW. Right. Ciao.
xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2004-10-06 ch 1,	abuseHeh. Wow. It's evident that you've got amazing prose and an interesting perspective of humor. Ah, such sweet irony. How profound at the end. That is a great statement. Something for me to think about for a while. Your themes are always thought-provoking, and more people should appreciate this art that you've crafted together. I'm eager to know when your future works will come out. chibichocobo
Pico the Great 2004-10-05 ch 1,	abuseThat rocked. Yeah. - COuple grammar/mechanical mistakes, nothing major. - Again, this rocked. It was actually funny (tragedy? where?) -PTG
mizu no kokoro 2004-09-21 ch 1,	abuse@_@ confusing yet it did impress me^^ lol~~ keep writing!
Arien Gwathwen 2004-09-20 ch 1,	abuseNot exactly laugh-out-loud humor but the irony of the whole situation makes up for it. I still prefer your poetry, but you should post more short stories like this one.
GingerKiss 2004-09-17 ch 1,	abuseHa. I love it. And I'm currently feeling impressed by you're writing range - you can write something like this, or rants, or amazing poetry... and you have a way of making me feel inferior...and making me think that I should start posting my real stuff on here, not the wide-audience-easy-reading stuff I normally post.
TJ Henri 2004-09-16 ch 1,	abuseMade me chuckle a little. Although I don't think the note on the corpse really fitted in with the whole joke. The absurdity is clearly evident (unless you "don't get it"). Actually, I stopped reading when I saw the note, because I thought I had just finished (your other pieces usually end something like that), but went back now to actually review it. I guess you must read D. Adams as well as your existential library (although Adams does focus on the absurd in some of his works, which is enjoyable). I really liked the ending though. That was class.
Cthulhu 2004-09-16 ch 1,	abuse** hilarious, you are very funny and seemingly clever, keep it up mate!
lola-in-slacks 2004-09-16 ch 1,	abuseFrouge. How rouge. :) too intellectual for me p.s. have you been reading The Blind Watchmaker?
KeikoOokami 2004-09-16 ch 1,	abuseHey, I really didn't get it. But I'm sure it was good.

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