I think you did excellent, i really enjoyed that.
Bloody brilliant! :D

P.S. Im Welsh! ^_^

*shoots herself* for not having reviewed half of Kaptain Neffles' stories until now. Thank god Stewie saw sense eventually (and for anyone who doesn't know the background, don't worry it's not in the story).

A real tear jerker *grabs the tissues* (barh, i sound like Ickle!)

Beautiful!

The main character's name changes back forth from Dan to Ian. Other than that, awesome story. ^_^

I really like this, I like all your one-shots.

omigod!! is this a one-shot? bcos i looks like it can be continued!! if it isnt pls continue...

;_; the angst. the beauty. i like. this is mu8ch love.

It was good. Excellently narrated, with unforgettable descriptions. The only small flaw I saw was that the narrator Dan/Ian seemed to have 2 names... Anyway, good job, unique and bittersweetly beautiful.

This was suggested to me from a friend and i must say I really enjoyed your style. Refreshing. :) though the swithc to the name Ian..confused me but other then that great story!! Keep it up!

Man, you write really interesting smut. And I mean "smut" in the absolute best sense of the word [insert lame winking emoticon]
-VVL

::sniffle:: that was beautiful... you're an extremely talented person...

I just wanted to tell you that this is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job.

wow, amazingly intense emotional piece of writing there. Totally love it ^^

GREAT!
Aw! I really liked this one!
Both main characters are great! xD
The plot of the story, the way you write about Dan's feelings is great... and you really make Stuart an enigma.
I LOVE it!
Your writing is so great, you know?
Please keep writing, I love all your stories!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
(Do you really like the name Lee or I'm missing something here?)

*tears* *sniffle* Dan...poor Dan. Why, Stuart? Why?! *sniffle* It's so sad. So very sad. Make them happy!! Solve the mystery! *sniffle* I like the style. So nicely written. Poetic even. Me likie. *sigh* Poor Dan!!