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| Rose Valentine 2007-09-28 ch 1,  | abuseYou're gonna be my fave! I can relate to your pieces. |
| Atephobic 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. |
| moo says the cow 2006-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseFor some reason I am reminded of an infant who did not want to be born. |
| AntiPleasure 2004-10-03 ch 1, | abuse*mouth drops* raw.. very raw and nicely done. Jenna xoxo |
| Rainy 2004-09-17 ch 1, | abuseToki, you're crazy! Okay- You're not. (Maybe just a little.) You're such a great poet! You're work always inspires me to write. Can't wait for more... |
| konochi 2004-09-16 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, wonderful work. I love all your poems. You're such a great writer. ^_^ |
| Brandy Bear 2004-09-16 ch 1, | abusei love the repetiton used and i really like the line: "A confused entity trapped inside nowhere" that is my fav great poem BrandyBear |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI love it, I love the repetitive nature of the line about your mothers warmth, its beautiful and I think that as everyone grows older they can relate to it, Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |