I like this. It's religious, but still not totally unoriginal. It at least has some imagery in it, unlike some religious poems which are horribly uncreative. It's good to be brave enough to use rhyme nowadays... often people seem to think rhyme makes their poetry childish, but they're wrong. Your rhythm gets a bit fuzzy towards the end, though.

Very nice take on a thunder storm. really cool, i liked it alot. Keep up the good work-Keith Andrew

Amen, I really liked the way you personified the storm as a divine wake up call. Artistically the lines flow quite nicely for the most part. Though some of the lines sound slightly awkward and "laughted" is mispelled.
Jolly good overall! Bravo.
~The Benster! (One must always sign one's name with an exclamation mark if one wishes to get anywhere in life.)

very good, I'm not usually a religious poem read but this one is very good!
Keep it up.
Also thank you for adding me to your favourites list, though I don't think I'm worthy!

Nice! Not a style I'm hugely fond of, but I must say I like it a lot. Also the communication of Truth within the poem. Good job :D
In response to another reviewer: In Christian theology, the Son IS God. But understanging "the God deal" to mean the Father part of the Trinity, the general belief on the relationship is that the Father tells the Son what to do, and the Son does it.

cool. True.

great work keep it up

I like. But what did you mean by the Son? Did you mean the Sun, and it's just a typo, or are you referring to something totally different? I don't know too much about other faiths, and I thought the God deal dealt with that.

This is absolutely breath-taking. I'm glad you found God in your life. Oh, I'm changing my name to Moron's Daughter, just to let you know.