yes. wow.
strong, great diction.
'logic says i must' - i like that. i like quite a few things.
very nice job.:)

Nice summary. I like the free verse, and you've got some great feelings down in a few lines. "Liar" and "Fool"... those are awesome. Can't be a hero all the time - we all need support. The curse of our position.
I can tell you... in all seriousness... you can lean on me anytime, if it helps you. After all... I hurt people too, and they always say they'll be the ones to change that and stand up to it...
Nice job.