So good! I love it :D The style for this one's more raw...I think it's my favorite of yours so far :D
Becky

Last line... "she had found her soul mate." Who is her soul mate? I got lost. I think I'd have to have you read this to me and explain it. That'd be sexy sexy. I am pretty sure that you write in the same manner as you talk, and so your writing would probably make a whole lot more sense if you (I am pointing at you) were reading it. I know that I personally wish and hope that people read my poetry with the same style that I read it with. Because it just makes more sense that way. Anyway wonderfull story AKA revelation. And you wrote about talking on Instant Messaging, that is modern, I don't think I've ever seen that before... so you're breaking ground! Good stuff.