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| Ivy Ether 2006-03-10 ch 7,  | abuseLol, okay, so maybe Liu's not so much empathetic as he is psychotically evil. Tomato, tomatah! Lol keep going, keep going! |
| Chibi-Chichan 2006-01-14 ch 7, | abuseVery interesting and intriguing. I'd like to see you update this soon. I'd love to see how this story progresses and so far it's a very good beginning. |
| Ranuko 2005-10-27 ch 7, anon. | abusehay, tingnan mo, itong story ang nagbibigay ng pinakamaraming reviews mo, at ito pa un pinagiisipan mong bibitawan. sayang :P sana magupdate ka uli |
| Anarkali 2005-02-12 ch 7, | abuseah...update.What's the sword for? |
| Rising Falcon 2005-02-03 ch 7, | abuseKill, kill, kill? Well good but make it longer |
| stariel 2005-01-27 ch 7, | abuseinteresting... a sword for a drinking party? hmms... |
| Anarkali 2005-01-22 ch 6, | abuseSome Chinese at last!! ^_^ THey should take this and turn it into a TV show...like Huan Zhu Ge Ge, you know?It would be a hit...Anyways, good chapter. I like the descriptions of the place.Ya Gui's an interesting character. He cares for La Principe but he's also loyal to La Principe's Dad...Wonder if he'll keep La Principe's secret... |
| Rising Falcon 2005-01-21 ch 6, | abuseHiya G-shock! Updated finally! Liked the story except why does it have to be crammed up in one paragraph? You should cut it anyways update! |
| stariel 2005-01-11 ch 6, | abusehmms. not bad! just a suggestion though, leave a line between each conversation line... other than that, i'm intrigued that the servant has already found out! wonder whether he'll remain loyal...? |
| Ivy Ether 2005-01-10 ch 6, | abusehmm. you actually made that Liu Guang a bit empathetic. that's really good. and I love the way you describe the environment. it sounds very rich and vibrant, especially in how the cherry blossoms relate to Liu's sorrow. I loved that part and the jade garden chair. Very poetic, but it fits the story well. I await the next chapter. Cheers! |
| Ranuko 2004-12-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseYi zhing hen jio le. Update na!! :D look. chapter-review ratio of 5:16, meaning, 1 chapter is to 3 reviews. Bu cuo le! Umm...plano mo bang palitan ung title? Coz its a bit...long...and umm...people who are looking for it in the Search machine might have a hard time... Anyways, if you make this story long enough and good enough, you might get an agent who's willing to help you get it published. :D Imagine publishing your own book at 18...or 21...hehehe lol anyways, update na! |
| Rising Falcon 2004-12-04 ch 5, | abuseGood job bro! |
| Anarkali 2004-12-03 ch 5, | abuse*shakes head* tindi ah...buti tinaasan mo na yung rating =)...and umm... it's "screamed at the top of her lungs", not "at the top of her throat", but it's still a very good chapter...so update!! |
| Ivy Ether 2004-12-01 ch 5, | abuseHeehee, I'd kick that prince in the face, too! Well done! I like the story a lot so far. And since you said this came from your diary entries, who is the person based on the prince? Jes wonderin'...I would just say not to use so much side notes, as it can detract from the story.Keep it up, and I hope to keep reading more! |
| stariel 2004-11-28 ch 1, | abusehey! i'm intrigued by the story, esp the part about the prophecy! like the way u end off with "you will know"s... great job! cant wait till u update... thnx for the reviews, btw! =]-stariel |