I like it. I can't say anything else. It's just cool. I like "and in the hour of sustained glass, I capture us and watch us dance"; it's kind of like you're saying that eternity is here when I'm with you, and every moment with you is forever there, in the eternal. It's like time stops. SO cool

I love the sweetness and light imagery here. Very pretty.

Lovely.

Aww!! that is awesome!! it was just what i was in the mood for!!

hey that was awesome and i m not like other people on here who just say that so that u will read some of their material, well i dont do that and this poem is sweet and so cute cant wait to read more.