this is great...

and thank you for reviewing too!

Very nice poem.

Beautiful imagery! ~David~

Good work and good title.

Although I cannot deny your talent in writing I would have to say that you kind of lacked some imagery in your haikus... But your haikus are quite unique anyway, it's straight to the point but it still runs deep. Keep writing:)... You should read some of my haikus.

Sometimes acceptance of one's pains helps. I can sense the disbelief and hopelessness and desperation of the situation protrayed in your haiku. Great write.

[Forenote: Writing good, good job.]
Quit it. . . you're depressing me. . .